I think it’s pretty good. I particularly like the red building. The eyes and their contact between the two characters, also. The only suggestion I would make is to add some detailing to the older woman’s left side. It seems like a few lines like those you used on the girl would work fine.
Thanks for the comment! Makes sense; I was aiming for a mysterious black sweep but it just turned out a bit blank. I will probably detail the gray wall a bit as well. The final date for submital has been extended to the 11th, so I may fiddle with details on the other drawings as well.
Yeah, that’s a lot better now. What a difference a couple of lines can make.
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